J. Haux

this is making fun of BILL CLINTON not bush People aren't catching that, are they? *slightly amused* I think I heard the first one before.

Then congradulations! That's the mark of a good writer. :D Well...fencing is less like that, it's more of a sport, no "stunts". Still very complicated. But your writing held resemblance ...

I think when you're hurling every five minutes, it's the perfect time for editing...this neglectance is shameful! ! None of us expect you to edit when you're ill. Sleep. Rest. ...

It's the sport of...sparring? Swordfighting? What they were doing. I'm a (novice)fencer myself, and you portrayed it so well, I wondered if you were one. I'm so sorry you're sick! ...

Try editing before posting...actually, I think that's a rule. :) I didn't notice it in your other stories I read. This was the first time you never had any periods, ...

Oh my, did I not comment on this before? I read it! Um...I'm not very good with poetry. But I can recognize this: it's a circle story. The fisherman and ...

You'd think they'd pick it up on Microsoft Word wouldn't you? I think one reason for that is that, for example, "She ranted" is a genuine sentence all by itself. ...

I can't tell you how pleased I am that y'all like them. (OMGosh, I said "y'all") :D

I'm so glad! :D

You don't happen to be a fencer, do you? :wink: Wow! This is awesome. I've been fencing for a little while, and I can identify with this. It was very ...

I don't think it was so much his description as...the fact that people were staring. I liked this, it's very interesting. I hope to read more, to see how it ...

First of all, I'm going to warn you that I'm a hard critic. I try to help though. :D Fantasy: ah...now that's my thing (I think). I think you've got ...

An onomatopoeia is a word that is used to describe a sound of some sort, like "Honk!" "Ping!" "Ring!" "Errr---eeek!" "Moo!" "Oink!" "eee-aww!" "Boom!" etc...And the one onomatopoeia we had ...

Well, that's not that big a mistake. :) I'll go check them out. I've only posted...poems, and they're not my speciality either. You can look at them if you want. ...

...Maybe it gives it the sense of repetitive inner dialogue, when you're trying to calm down: "Calm down, calm down, relax, relax, calm down, calm down, relax, relax..." You know. ...